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Igor Kagan's avatar

Great read!

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Faith Current's avatar

If I were in possession of a mainstream set of ethics (which I am not, leaning more towards antinomianism, despite its obvious dangers), I'd say that your flash fiction is an astute commentary on the tension between the right to privacy and the desire to avoid harm to society.

Also, you are, of course, aware that an artist is always found in their art, no matter how much they protest otherwise... ;-)

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Faith Current's avatar

I don't like google's definition, so: antinomianism: the sense that those who have had a profound and life-changing inner experience are no longer subject to the conventional moral, legal, or social strictures for their own sake, but are now free to act in accord with their inner spiritual knowledge" (The Secret History of Western Sexual Mysticism, Arthur Versluis)

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Oleg Kagan's avatar

What does your particular set of ethics say that my story is a commentary on?

Also, thanks for the definition. I was about to Google antinomianism.

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Faith Current's avatar

Oh my particular ethics don't have a comment other than as long as he wasn't torturing puppies, I'm good.

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Oleg Kagan's avatar

Not in this story.

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Faith Current's avatar

Do you know what the crime was? Not that you should say, it's better not to, obviously, since it's a McGuffin (sp?). Just curious if you had one in mind.

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Oleg Kagan's avatar

Bolter was surveilling the captain without authorization. There were other crimes too, probably, but I'm not privy to that information.

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da-AL's avatar

back in the day when Trader Joe's gave out samples, every time I'd go in, I'd see the woman who usually worked the sample table get more & more brittle lol

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Oleg Kagan's avatar

Though people say thank you, it's a thankless job.

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Dan's avatar

I didn't know you'd taken a job as Captain of an off-world colony!

Oh, wait...

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Oleg Kagan's avatar

😉

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